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I have to say I am dissapointed how little attention this piece has gotten. 
I personally find it fantastic. Sure, it's not all dolled up and shiney, but the "sketchiness" gives it a sense of life; something I personally find incredibly hard to both create myself as well as find amongst other artists when it comes to pieces like this. I am also a sucker for texture, but only when it's done right. That would definately have to be here, I think. It's enough to give the piece some depth and some nice things to look at without being overkill. The particular area that's slighty right to the center especially has my attention.
After looking at this for awhile, I just noticed what looks to be people(?). I find it neat that you put some in (if you did >>; ), but if you ever come back to work on/finish this piece, maybe making them slighty more obvious? (Again, assuming those are supposed to be people and it's not just me makign things up...)
The only other thing that I can point out is the line closest to us going to the detonator seems way too flat. Everything else has depth, but that section seems overly flat compared to the rest.
Besides that, I honestly couldn't point out anything critique-worthy. I seriously think you did a fine job here. Perspective, detail, texture use, concept. Speaks to my artistic interests like nobody's business.
I do enjoy what you've done so far, espcially with your grayscale concepts like this one. Hopefully more people will take note of you and your work as well, becuase you really deserve more then the mesely views and such that you've gotten thus far.
Keep up the beastly work, sir.
I personally find it fantastic. Sure, it's not all dolled up and shiney, but the "sketchiness" gives it a sense of life; something I personally find incredibly hard to both create myself as well as find amongst other artists when it comes to pieces like this. I am also a sucker for texture, but only when it's done right. That would definately have to be here, I think. It's enough to give the piece some depth and some nice things to look at without being overkill. The particular area that's slighty right to the center especially has my attention.
After looking at this for awhile, I just noticed what looks to be people(?). I find it neat that you put some in (if you did >>; ), but if you ever come back to work on/finish this piece, maybe making them slighty more obvious? (Again, assuming those are supposed to be people and it's not just me makign things up...)
The only other thing that I can point out is the line closest to us going to the detonator seems way too flat. Everything else has depth, but that section seems overly flat compared to the rest.
Besides that, I honestly couldn't point out anything critique-worthy. I seriously think you did a fine job here. Perspective, detail, texture use, concept. Speaks to my artistic interests like nobody's business.
I do enjoy what you've done so far, espcially with your grayscale concepts like this one. Hopefully more people will take note of you and your work as well, becuase you really deserve more then the mesely views and such that you've gotten thus far.
Keep up the beastly work, sir.